Good or bad?

I like this one the least out of the ones you've posted so far, it doesn't flow as nice as the other ones for some reason. I like "Moment" the best so far, LOL. It really sounded like it was going somewhere... If you have an interest in song writing you should pursue it. Writing is also my pion (but not songs), that's why I got a degree in Journalism. I'm not as good at anything else, LOL. Good luck.